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Post by [~]*Steel Moon*[~] on Jul 18, 2007 18:45:16 GMT -5
I made this just for fun
[shadow=red,left,300]Prologue[/shadow]
A light brown cat padded up to a small pond. The light of the bright, new-leaf sun reflected off the Crystal clear pond on to the cat's pelt. The small she-cat stared into the pond in awe.
She sat there for a long time and then whispered slowly, "Why me? I'm just an ordinary apprentice."
Another cat padded up and said loudly, " What are you doind here? And why are you staring at a pond?" The cat paused then continued "Fernpaw, please tell me!"
Fernpaw turned and said "Birchpaw, please, you know me better than that. I'm not a kit any more! And nothings going on, trust me!"
Birchpaw looked lovingly at Fernpaw and commented, "You can tell me, I might be able to help..." ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Well, how good/bad is it?((i know, its short!!))
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Post by Fireblood on Jul 18, 2007 18:56:23 GMT -5
It is very good
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Post by [~]*Steel Moon*[~] on Jul 18, 2007 18:58:43 GMT -5
thankx!
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Post by Fireblood on Jul 18, 2007 21:03:56 GMT -5
Welcome
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Post by ☼Light of the Sea☼ on Jul 19, 2007 10:47:16 GMT -5
=D I love it! It surprised me to see more stories but they'll all be good! ^^ *thinks about Ch. 2 on my story*
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Post by [~]*Steel Moon*[~] on Jul 19, 2007 10:56:57 GMT -5
Hmm....I have my intire story writen out on paper......maybe It's time for Ch.1.......
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Post by Leopardstar on Jul 24, 2007 12:29:08 GMT -5
Great considering the length!!
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Post by Fireblood on Aug 9, 2007 14:27:45 GMT -5
You should write the 1st chaspter on here.
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Post by swifttail on Aug 13, 2007 21:56:24 GMT -5
Yah, it is much easyer... Cause I HAAAATE copieing stuff on paper on to the computer.
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Post by Fireblood on Aug 14, 2007 0:21:27 GMT -5
lol, Yah, its not that bad....
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