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Post by ☼Light of the Sea☼ on Jul 16, 2007 13:57:37 GMT -5
You don't have to find photos of them. ^^' It's ok, I'll get some pictures sometime.
Swifty, don't worry about it. I never said Vicky was 'an Erin Hunter', I simply dedicated it to her like Cherith and kate. ^^ Of course, I still don't think that this should actually become a real book, but...
The main character is mainly Crowkit - soon to be Crowpaw, but also Whitekit/paw and Owlkit/paw. It's sort of like a trio thing - like Power of Three, only not.
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Post by swifttail on Jul 16, 2007 14:03:46 GMT -5
Yah, anything with the Clan cats, you can't publish it. It would be plagerizeing.
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Post by ☼Light of the Sea☼ on Jul 16, 2007 14:05:02 GMT -5
I know. =\ Unless I got Erin Hunter's permission. ^^ Not like that's going to happen anytime soon. Plus, it's not long enough to be a real book, anyway.
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Post by swifttail on Jul 16, 2007 14:21:59 GMT -5
True.. I like it any ways!
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Post by [~]*Steel Moon*[~] on Jul 16, 2007 18:06:05 GMT -5
true..... sadly
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Post by ☼Light of the Sea☼ on Jul 19, 2007 11:22:24 GMT -5
Ch. 2 is here! I apologize for it being slightly shorter than Ch. 1...
Numero Dos
“Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey gather beneath the Tallrock for a Clan meeting.”
The words rang out throughout the camp and many head pricked as they woke from early naps in the sun. Owlkit perked up his head from where he had been washing with Whitekit and bounded over to sit near his leader, Specklestar, where she sat on the Tallrock.
The gray kit could barely believe that after six long moons of waiting he was finally going to be made into an apprentice. When he reached his spot of honor, he wasn’t surprised to see Crowkit already there, but instead turned his head away in wait for Whitekit. Crowkit’s probably been waiting there since the first light appeared, Owlkit thought contemptuously, then turned and wondered where in StarClan Whitekit was.
Confused, Owlkit searched the camp. No, the little white she-cat was nowhere to be seen. Worried, the gray kit turned to his brother. “Have you seen Whitekit? She should be here by now,” he asked in a nervous tone.
Crowkit looked surprised at being addressed so suddenly by his brother. “I haven’t seen her,” he replied. “Maybe she’s in the nursery?”
Owlkit looked at Crowkit, but shook his head. “She was washing with me just a few moments ago,” he meowed. “And she knew that we were becoming apprentices.”
The two kits lapsed into silence, but after a couple more moments Crowkit broke it, also sounding confused. “Where’s Silvertail?”
The black tom always referred to their mother as Silvertail, although Owlkit and Whitekit called her mother once or twice. But Crowkit was right, neither the little white kit nor their silver mother was anywhere to be seen.
“I’m going to tell Specklestar,” announced Owlkit. Without waiting for an agreement or protest from Crowkit, he bounded up to the top of the Tallrock.
“Specklestar-“ began Owlkit, then gasped at the size of the Tallrock. Most of the Clan had already assembled and were waiting patiently. The gray kit could just imagine himself as leader, strutting about, giving orders, and being obeyed…
“Yes, Owlkit,” said Specklestar quietly and gently, breaking him from his thoughts. The gray tomkit was brought sharply back to land and turned to look at his yellow leader. “Whitekit and Silvertail are nowhere to be seen,” he meowed hesitantly.
Specklestar raised her head and instantly searched the WindClan clearing. Owlkit could see immediately from the wonderful spot where he was standing that his statement had been correct. Specklestar’s amber eyes swept the whole camp before returning to Owlkit. “You’re right,” she meowed. “But we have to make you apprentice’s now.”
Owlkit nodded sullenly and dropped back down next to Crowkit. No longer was the excitement that had been burning in him around. If I can’t become an apprentice with Whitekit, he thought miserably, Then why become an apprentice at all?
^^ So? What say y'all?
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Post by Fireblood on Jul 21, 2007 14:09:51 GMT -5
I like it!!
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Post by swifttail on Aug 13, 2007 21:50:38 GMT -5
Looks good. And, who cares.... Short ch.? Pfft. lol
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Post by Fireblood on Aug 14, 2007 0:18:18 GMT -5
It isn't that short, and Oh well, look at your chapters...
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