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Post by silverblood on Jun 7, 2007 16:54:25 GMT -5
Name:Silverblood
Gender: She-cat
Clan: RougeClan
Age: 15 Moons
Rank: Warrior
Personality: Silverblood is a very curious cat. She loves to run around and play, but only when she is allowed to. Silverblood is a very loyal cat and will not kill a kit. She believes in StarClan but she can't tell her leader. Silverblood is a very fast runner and can swim fairly well. Silverblood is not a good fisher though. Silverblood can only catch a fish if it is dead which makes her very angry, so she has become dedicated to learning new techniques.
Appearance: Silverblood has silver lines on her black pelt. She has a red a blood nose. Silverblood's eyes are green like a new-leaves. Silverblood has black pads. Silverblood has a big red and orange scar on her face, from being attacked by a dog, that looks like the blaze of a fire. Silverblood has another scar that looks like the fur she has, but it turns red when she is angry or mad.
History: Kit~ When Silverblood was a kit she was a Rouge. Her parents' names were Cinder and Griefblood. Silverblood's mother, Cinder, died from green-cough. Her father, Griefblood, died from a dog attack. Silverblood had no brothers or sisters, because they had all died at birth. (If they hadn't died Silverblood would have 3 siblings.) Apprentice~ When Silverblood was an apprentice she used to help the leader of the clan. She loved to run around back then but she would get yelled at sometimes for being so loud. Warrior~ Since Silverblood just turned into a warrior one-forth of a moon ago she has not had much history.
Codeword: RougeClan
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Post by swifttail on Jun 7, 2007 19:24:40 GMT -5
Silverblood, this is an exellent bio! Just make an apperance, 'cause you did not fill it out, ask Light Of The Sea if you need spelling corrections, and I will accept you! [] Other than apperance, you are as good as gold!
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Post by ☼Light of the Sea☼ on Jun 7, 2007 20:54:14 GMT -5
Yeah, I'm a spelling fanatic. =O I could spell check =Swifttail's post right now, but I don't think I will.
History: Change where ("...her parents' names where...") to were. Add an apostrophe after parents. (See former example.) Make Died ("...Cinder, Died from...") lowercase. (died) Make green cough into green-cough.
That's all I see. Add appearance, like Swifty said, and voila! You've a beautiful bio. After I or Hawk or leopardstar checks the spelling of 'Appearance.' (Not the word, the actual description that you put down.)
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Post by swifttail on Jun 7, 2007 23:46:40 GMT -5
oooo! Silverblood finished!!!! Accepted as soon as it is spell checked! So one other person has to accept it!
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Post by Fireblood on Jun 8, 2007 11:21:52 GMT -5
It is an excellent bio.
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Post by swifttail on Jun 8, 2007 11:47:40 GMT -5
-Gives stink eye- Are you a G-mode?!?!
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Post by swifttail on Jun 8, 2007 11:57:52 GMT -5
Do you have permission to accept it? Hmmmmmm ;D Cause I do! I am a mode!
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Post by Leopardstar on Jun 8, 2007 13:14:49 GMT -5
Excellent! Just get Darkness to accept it!
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Post by Fireblood on Jun 8, 2007 13:26:48 GMT -5
Yep. Get Darkness to accept.
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Post by ¥♥Snowhawk♥¥ on Jun 8, 2007 17:20:54 GMT -5
Fireblood can check bios. ACCEPTED AS ROUGECLAN WARRIOR.
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