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Post by monkeytail on Jun 11, 2007 22:11:18 GMT -5
Name: Light Gender: She-cat Clan: RougeClan Age: 20 Moons Rank: Medicine Cat Personality: Light is a very loyal cat. She will do anything for her Clan. She is a very quick learner. She Is a very good stalker. She can sneak up on somebody without anyone hearing her. Light is a very gentle cat but can get pretty mean if someone is being mean to her and insulting her. Light can hear very well. Light believes in StarClan a little but doesn't believe in it at the same time. Appearance: Light is the color of a light bulb, very yellow. Light has a very red nose. She has a scar on the tip of her tail that is shaped like an E, it is black. Light's eyes are green and brown. Light's pads are very light pink. Light's ears are very big, and perk up every time she hears something that doesn't sound right. She has little stripes down her back and sides of white. History: Kit~~ When Light was a kit her mother, Fire, died and her father, Blood, died from green-cough. She had 2 Brothers and 1 sister. They all died when a dog raged threw the camp. She had hid and only got a scar from a dog scratching her, that time it only made a line down the tip of her tail. Her mentor was Bootblood and died from the dog attack. Apprentice~~ When Light was an Apprentice a pack of dogs raged threw the camp and she got three other scratches, that is what made the scar look like an E. Nobody died though. Medicine Cat~~ Light just became a medicine cat about 2 Moons ago. Light has done nothing except for bandage a few scratches and stop a lot of bleeding. Picture: Codeword: RougeClan
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Post by ¥♥Snowhawk♥¥ on Jun 12, 2007 23:16:30 GMT -5
Spell Check it.
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Post by swifttail on Jun 13, 2007 13:18:27 GMT -5
-suspishisly looks Light head to toe- Do I know her? Yes please spell check it, it is at the bottom! If that dose not work, send it through word. If that doesn't work, then send it to LOTS, wait, did I spell that right? Light Of The Sea..... wooooow wow, I will call her lots from now on! Ahem, back on track. A, well, I would widen your word choice a little more, sorry, I am too use to the way Erin writes... -sigh- If you can't I guess its okay. I don't want to give to much construcktive critisizom, because I feel like someome is ganna turn around and scold me! Well, thats pretty much it.
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Post by ¥♥Snowhawk♥¥ on Jun 14, 2007 23:29:56 GMT -5
You need to post on the adtiouns board, cause, someone else is trying out for the RougeClan med. cat. The loser will become the med.cat appretice and will be of apprentice age
Also, check this through Word while your at it. Wach out for those homophones. threw=though
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Post by ¥♥Snowhawk♥¥ on Jul 23, 2007 23:29:41 GMT -5
MOVED TO ADOPTION.
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