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Post by ¥♥Snowhawk♥¥ on Jul 5, 2007 20:38:35 GMT -5
Change the title of this thread to 'Sparkpaw-RiverClan apprentice- tom' or something like that.
Missing the Codeword
add two lines to Appreance.
a line and a half to personality
He can't be a former loner turned Clan cat with out an admin's premission.
Rp examle:change it. you're power playing and that is breaking the rules.
Capitlize all the 'Clans' in this bio and futre bios. two legs needs to be Two-legs
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Post by ♦Frosty on Jul 5, 2007 21:19:17 GMT -5
You still need to fix the title and any thing you forgot to do that Hawk said
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Post by swifttail on Jul 5, 2007 21:20:51 GMT -5
YAH! Do what they said! //::Good bio::\\
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Post by ¥♥Snowhawk♥¥ on Jul 23, 2007 23:44:22 GMT -5
Also, make it easier for us to read it, please
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Post by ♦Frosty on Jul 26, 2007 9:35:59 GMT -5
The bio post was deleted I supose....? Then this should just be but into the RougeClan's attacks.
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