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Post by Fireblood on May 28, 2007 9:50:59 GMT -5
Name: Shadewing
Gender: She-Cat Age: 18 moons
Rank: N/A
Clan: loner
Appearance: Shadewing's pelt is very fluffy. She is light though. Her fur has peach spots everywhere, other than that she is white. Shadewing is very thin. Shadewing's eyes are the color of a peach. Shadewing's nose is the color light pink. Shadewing's pads are green from always trudging through the forest. Shadewing has a big purple scar across her back from being attacked by a dog.
Personality: Shadewing is a very good climber. Shadewing is very loyal. Shadewing doesn't mind killing, but she would rather hold them captive and torture them. Shadewing doesn't get testy or jealous around other she-cats. Shadewing loves every cat from kits to leaders. She doesn't mind killing them but she likes them just as they are and if she doesn't have to kill she won't. Shadewing does believe in the StarClan.
History: When Shadewing was born her parents died. She never knew them. She has been on her own since she was 5 and a half moons old. Shadewing has been feeding herself what ever she can find. Shadewing got that big purple scar from a dog attacking her one night when she was out hunting. Ever since then she has never hunted at night and has stayed in the best make shift den she could find.
Codeword: RougeClan
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Post by ☼Light of the Sea☼ on May 28, 2007 11:10:24 GMT -5
Note: You don't have to capitalize 'wing' in 'ShadeWing', but you can if you want to.
Put a space between '18' and 'moons'
Appearance: Change 'truching' to 'trudging'.
Why is she waiting for ShadowClan to accept her? I'm pretty sure that they weren't mentioned in her history, and I'm not sure why she would be waiting. Does ShadowClan know her? Were her parents ShadowClan cats? Has she met up with Darkstar and talked to him? Please elaborate!
I'm going to wait for Hawk to accept this (or leopardstar). Plus you need to make the change.
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Post by Leopardstar on May 28, 2007 11:14:05 GMT -5
I agree with light of the sea. Fix what she said and you will be accepted.
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Post by ☼Light of the Sea☼ on May 28, 2007 11:27:47 GMT -5
Much better. Thank you. I can't actually accept it, but I'm pretty sure that leopardstar and Hawk will be ready to accept it as soon as one comes online. Unless leopardstar made herself an invisible user.
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Post by Leopardstar on May 28, 2007 11:32:09 GMT -5
Hey! I am right here you know!! And... ACCEPTED AS LONER!!
As soon as you want to join RougeClan, if you do, pm Hawk.
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Post by ☼Light of the Sea☼ on May 28, 2007 11:37:36 GMT -5
>.> Well, to me, you look offline...
=D YAY, SHADEWING! Go get 'em, girl!
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Post by swifttail on May 28, 2007 11:42:56 GMT -5
Light Of The Sea, I think you can accept bios! If not blamb me. ;D
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Post by ¥♥Snowhawk♥¥ on May 28, 2007 13:24:29 GMT -5
Accepted as..............loner?
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Post by Fireblood on May 31, 2007 17:57:55 GMT -5
thank you!!
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