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Post by ¥♥Snowhawk♥¥ on Aug 10, 2007 17:15:27 GMT -5
Name:Thornkit
Gender:Tom
Age:Less than one moon
Rank:Kit (no duh)
Clan: WindClan
Appearance: Thornkit has a black and brown tabby pelt. His eyes are a light golden color. He has white circles around his claws, that appear ring like. He has medium length claws, that are white and glimmer in the sun like small daggers. Thornkit has a small v-chip in his ear from rough housing with his siblings and Hazelstream's kits. Thornkit has a small scar from fighting with Flickerkit, Hazelstream's kit.
Personality:Thornkit doesn't get along with his siblings very well. He looks up to Hawkflight and wants to be her deputy someday. He thinks that Mudclaw was a pieice of Mousedung that was half ShadowClan. He has a small crush on Thislekit, of Hazelstream's litter. He wants his mentor to be Brightwind, his best friend's mentor. His best friend is Stormpaw, a gray tom. Thornkit thinks that Cinderpaw and Stonepaw like each other, but Stormpaw denies it.
History:Thornkit was born to two WindClan warriors, Ivorypelt, an ivory colored she-cat and Brambletail, a dark brown tom. His siblings are Rosekit, a white tom, Stormkit, a dark gray tom, Leafkit, a tortiseshell and white(calico) she-kit, Pantherkit, a dark brown she-kit and, Featherkit, a light gray she-kit. Thronkit gets into fights with his siblings and Hazelstream's kits all the time, and Hazelstream's adopted kits, Midnightkit and Boulderkit. Thornkit plans to stay in WindClan his whole life, and wants to be a warrior more than he wants to live, which is odd.
Piture:
Codeword:RougeClan
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Post by Fireblood on Aug 11, 2007 16:08:37 GMT -5
Check grammer.
History: 'Thonkit' should be 'Thornkit' 'Midnigtkit' should be 'Midnightkit'
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Post by ¥♥Snowhawk♥¥ on Aug 11, 2007 16:11:39 GMT -5
fixed
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Post by Fireblood on Aug 11, 2007 16:13:11 GMT -5
ACCEPTED!!!
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Post by lillycloud on Aug 11, 2007 20:19:36 GMT -5
I like wants to become a warrior more than live... which is odd.
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Post by ♦Frosty on Aug 12, 2007 19:21:07 GMT -5
Lillycloud, this isn't a radom posting area please dont post useless stuff on bios or roleplays for that matter.......
Back to the bio, looks good accepted!
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Post by ☼Light of the Sea☼ on Aug 13, 2007 9:56:29 GMT -5
Personality: '...that Hazelstream are Hawkflight's kits...' O.o Since when is Hazelstream more then one cat? And kit of Hawkflight? (No offense) ^^ Could you change this please so it makes more sense?
History: Second line, after fifth word. Could you add or subtract a dot, please?
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Post by ¥♥Snowhawk♥¥ on Aug 13, 2007 20:25:30 GMT -5
fixed
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Post by swifttail on Aug 13, 2007 22:40:35 GMT -5
Accepted. I will lock it.
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Post by Fireblood on Aug 14, 2007 9:49:33 GMT -5
Accepted.
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