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Post by [.v.u.l.t.u.r.e.] on Sept 11, 2007 16:40:30 GMT -5
((Ok, this is after Falcon leaves the ThunderClan camp that RogueClan is invading, where he gave up being evil, and Sharptongue did some serious damage on his eyes; she's blinded him for life!  lol.))
A massive white tomcat staggered through the RogueClan camp entrance. His black paws struggled so support him, but made it to the fresh-kill pile before finally giving in. Falcon crashed to the ground and yowled as he fell on his wounded shoulder. But that wasn't the only battle mark on him; the battered and bloodied warrior was covered with cuts and his snow-colored pelt was stained with blood. And the worst thing was his eyes; they didn't look anything like eyes, for they were covered in blood and all scratched up. And Falcon couldn't see! The only thing that comforted him was the warm smell of freshly-caught prey; it made him know that he was home.
Suddenly, the red cloud that blotted Falcon's vision faded to black, and the same blue-gray she-cat that he had seen and spoken to when he briefly went to visit StarClan back in the battle came into view. Stardust hung around her pelt, moving with her fine muscles as she padded up to him.
"I'm terribly sorry, Falcon," she mewed quietly. "StarClan is the only thing you will ever see now."
Falcon gasped and his neck fur began to rise. "W-what do you mean? Am I dying?"
The she-cat gave a soft laugh. "No, of course not. But your eyes; they are all clawed up. And you can't see anything. I hope you took a good look at the ThunderClan camp . . . because that was the last thing you will ever see of the real world."
Falcon's yellow eyes widened, and he took a step back. "You mean . . ." He gulped. "I'm blinded?"
The StarClan she-cat nodded, her blue eyes pools of sorrow and regret. "I'm so sorry." Then, without another word, she faded away into nothing - and Falcon returned to the world as he opened his eyes. The eyes that would never see anything ever again.
((Poor Falcon.  But it'll be fun to write about. Heehee.))
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Post by swifttail on Sept 11, 2007 18:24:14 GMT -5
Blazzingblood was at the other end of camp, his heart was raceing. The tom was fightong a cat when al of a sudden, he aroused to the smell of his friend returning.
With out streching, the tom raced over to Falcon, and came skisdding to a halt. "Greetings!" Blazzingblood said entergeticly, since he was cooped up in camp all day. "I had a craaaaazy dream! There was this she cat, and she was--" Blazz stopped when he saw his freind not responding. "Okay, look Falcon, I am sorry I kept acting like a moody she-cat, but, I am sorry! Don't have to be grumpy! Come on, one on one you just came from a battle, you should be PUMPED! Did you kill any cats? Is that why you are bumbed? You feel guilty..."
Blazzingblood got down to the white tom's levle and touched noses with him. Blazzingblood looked into his eyes and saw the damage to his face. He jumped back, "Now I see, I am sorry, I am really energized because I did not get to go... Do you want me to get some herbs for that? Dust taught me some..." His ears were pulseing with excitement.
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Post by [.v.u.l.t.u.r.e.] on Sept 12, 2007 16:21:02 GMT -5
Falcon heard Blazzingblood's familiar voice somewhere in the distance. "Greetings! . . . I am sorry . . . You feel guilty . . ." But he was still frozen in shock, finding it hard to grasp the concept that he was blinded forever more. Yes, he could hear his beloved friend, he could smell the comforting scent of his dark ginger pelt, but he could not see the mouth that spoke, or the fur he could at least vividly picture. He couldn't see Blazzingblood.
"Blazzingb-blood," Falcon rasped, coughing quietly. "I can't . . . can't see you. I can't s-see a-anything." He looked up at his comrade with his unseeing eyes, hoping the other tom would understand what he was trying to say.
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Post by swifttail on Sept 12, 2007 16:49:36 GMT -5
"Blind? Is that an infection?" Blazzingblood asked, not knowing what that was.
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Post by [.v.u.l.t.u.r.e.] on Sept 12, 2007 23:52:44 GMT -5
"No, you mousebrain!" Falcon snarled in annoyance. "It's when something's happened to your vision, to your eyes, so you can't see anything anymore. And when I was battling just now in the ThunderClan camp, this she-cat Sharptongue clawed up my eyes pretty good. I'm blinded . . ." He figured he should tell his friend about the other thing that occurred in the battle. "Oh . . . and also in the battle . . . I gave up being evil." Falcon held a wince as he waited for Blazzingblood to yell at him in shock.
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Post by swifttail on Sept 13, 2007 19:49:06 GMT -5
Blazzingblood caucked his head, and growled, "I'll fix her fur." Blazzingblood hissed, "Darkness should have took me! I would have slashed her eyes out! And, I hear that killing a Clan kit gives you good luck." Blazzingblood snickered evily.
The tom got up and layed down beside him, "I don't care if you are evil or not, you are still my friend. Anddon't worry, I will steel Sharptounges kits, and kill her friends and family. After that I will scratch her eyes out." Blazz rubbed up against Falcon's face affectionetly.
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Post by ¥♥Snowhawk♥¥ on Sept 13, 2007 19:52:45 GMT -5
((I don't give if it says open, but can Rubykit and Diamondkit join?))
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Post by [.v.u.l.t.u.r.e.] on Sept 17, 2007 15:02:11 GMT -5
((Yeah, sure.))
"No, Blazzingblood!" Falcon hissed, cuffing his friend over the head with a paw, though with some difficulty considering he couldn't see where to put his paw. "Didn't you hear me? I'm not evil anymore, and no friend of mine is going to do anything as evil as that on my account. That'll pretty much just make me evil - again!"
He was silent for a moment. Thoughts were flashing through his mind, thoughts that made his heart ache. He had lost his family moons ago, he was slowly losing his best friend, and now he had even lost his simple ability to see! He hated Sharptongue for blinding him, but he knew that it wasn't her fault; she had just been trying to protect her Clan. What had happened was his fault, and he couldn't ignore it. He would never see again . . . because of his own self. How could he get any stupider?!
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Post by ¥♥Snowhawk♥¥ on Sept 17, 2007 17:34:53 GMT -5
((yay ;D))
Rubykit tumbled out of the nursury, Diamondkit chasing her. Where do I go? the ginger and black she-kit thought, running stright. The she-kit looked behind her, seeing her grayish-ginger freind.
Diamondkit raced after her best freind, hissing as she ran straight out of the nursury. As she saw Rubykit look back, the ginger and gray she-kit noticed that Rubykit was about to run into Falcon and Blazzingblood. Diamondkit held her breath as Rubykit ran into Falcon, knowing about her father's bad temper.
Rubykit slammed head first into Falcon, sending the RougeClan leader's daughter strait to the ground, painfully. The ginger she-kit looked up, shook her head vigoursly, and grinned. "Hi Falcon," she squeked, "Hi Blazzingblood."
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Post by swifttail on Sept 18, 2007 21:35:28 GMT -5
Blazzingbood saw the kit and bulked up real big. 'I will scare her! Ha! Why, oh yah, CAUSE I DID NOT GET TO GO, TO THE STUPID BATTLE!!' Blazzingblood opened his mouth to hiss, but, he gaged. [[He looks like he is dieing, or, is a monster.]]
Glyder appeared out of nowhere, and padded behind Diamondkit like she was her shadow. "Hello Diamond-- Wow, what in foxdung is going on with you!" Glyder spat at Blazzingblood.
"Oh shut up and go away pest. No one here likes you!" Blazsingblood retorted.
Glyder was the size of a new warrior, almost, and made her chest broad, to hide any agreement, "I have friends-- Right Diamondkit!" The she-cat stood her ground.
Blazzingblood stood up, and towared over the she-cat, "You are no friend of hers, you wern't born in RougeClans! You aren't even worthy enough to be an apprentice, who ever heard of a seventh month old kit!" Blazzingblood scoffed.
Glyder cowarded back.
"As I thought crowfood." Blazzingblood snorted, "You'd better learn your place," Blazzingblood unleashed his jagged metal claws, "Before I teach it to you." The tom clawed back over to his place.
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Post by ¥♥Snowhawk♥¥ on Sept 18, 2007 21:44:26 GMT -5
Diamnodkit looked at Glyder. "Hi Glyder," she squeked happily to her freind, her blue crystals glittering happily.
Rubykit whiped her head toward Blazzingblood. "Darkness will make her an apprentice soon, he was talking to Roseblood about who her mentor should be." the ginger kit looked at Falcon. "What happened to him?" she asked, flicking her tail at Falcon.
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Post by [.v.u.l.t.u.r.e.] on Sept 21, 2007 1:24:05 GMT -5
((Huh? Hawk, you said Falcon was Rubykit's father and the leader of RogueClan. Did you mean Darkness?))
Falcon spat furiously as a small but discomforting weight hit his side and he had to dig his claws into the ground to keep from losing his balance. He couldn't see who or what had ran into him, but he would claw their ears to shreds.
"Hey, you piece of mouse dung! Who hit me?!" he hissed, looking around, though his blind eyes beheld nothing. The weight had been tiny...It must've just been some mousebrained kit. He sighed and hung his head in shame as he realized how much he sounded like a crabby elder. Suddenly his blood turned to ice and his heart froze. If he could no longer see, he could no longer fight - or hunt, or patrol, or be of any use at all to the Clan. And knowing Darkness, the savage RogueClan leader would either retire him early to the elders' den...or kill him.
((That would be a cool little thing, if his dreams of helping Deathblood overthrow Darkness and all the bad that's in the forest and becoming a great leader one day were shattered because he had to retire to the elders' den early because he became blind - like Longtail.  OMSC, I'm reading The Sight and I was so sad when I realized that (SPOILER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!) Goldenflower had died. T_T And Rainwhisker, too. I really liked Rainwhisker...)
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Post by ¥♥Snowhawk♥¥ on Sept 21, 2007 21:22:54 GMT -5
((Yeah, I ment Darkness. ;D))
Rubykit sat up, shaking herself and twiching her tail. "I'm no peice of mousedung." Rubykit hissed, her voice hard, and farly cold, "you would have to be as blind as a mole to tell that." She twiched her ear, hoping that Diamondkit would catch on.
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Post by [.v.u.l.t.u.r.e.] on Sept 21, 2007 22:32:43 GMT -5
Falcon froze as the she-kit spat at him ignorantly. He narrowed his eyes, though it made the deep scratches that had blinded him sting.
"Well, any piece of mouse dung would be smart enough to know that I AM BLIND, YOU PIECE OF MOUSE DUNG!!!" He unsheathed his claws and dug them deep into the earth, trying to stop himself from clawing at Rubykit's face; he had vowed to never do one evil deed again - but of course that did not help his hot temper and sharp tongue one bit.
((Well, apparently not! O.O xD
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Post by ¥♥Snowhawk♥¥ on Sept 21, 2007 22:37:01 GMT -5
The ginger she-kit stepped back., not in fear but in shock. Her blue crystals grew wide, but then swelled down to normal size, olny narrower.
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