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Post by ¥♥Snowhawk♥¥ on Sept 30, 2007 16:25:20 GMT -5
Use Microsoft Word to help your bios, and don't just add every wrong word, then you'd be in trouble Here is what I caught: which Apperance: eyes, that to eyes that or eyes, which ; Handsomely to handsomely, he can't be all handsome,
Personality: clan to Clan; pufer to prefer;den mates should be denmates; brothers should be brother, because he only has one brother; a cat can not be a young Tigerstar with out my premission, and he can't be all aggressive;
History: Mother to mother; witch should be which ; Vipepaw to Viperpaw
I hate my job
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Post by swifttail on Sept 30, 2007 18:18:54 GMT -5
Thank you hawk. I don't useually use that.
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Post by ¥♥Snowhawk♥¥ on Oct 3, 2007 22:43:43 GMT -5
fix the bio.
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Post by ☼Light of the Sea☼ on Dec 11, 2007 20:12:43 GMT -5
This bio still needs to be fixed before it can be accepted.
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Post by swifttail on Jan 20, 2008 16:10:18 GMT -5
Okay, done.
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Post by ¥♥Snowhawk♥¥ on Feb 12, 2008 20:47:28 GMT -5
one itsy bitsy little thing:
Personality: caucky to cocky
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Post by swifttail on Feb 12, 2008 21:44:36 GMT -5
Done, finally! =3
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Post by ¥♥Snowhawk♥¥ on Feb 12, 2008 21:58:10 GMT -5
Let me check....let me check...Checking...Checking...ACCEPTED
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Post by swifttail on Feb 12, 2008 22:24:25 GMT -5
YES!
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